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Deadbeat Daddy
Contributed by
amber_vonhorror
on
Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 09:26:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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its a little wonder his heart
still has the heart to beat
thumps hard to the sound of her voice
and barely pulses with her open handed slap
or one of her screaming attacks
where she tears him down
tells him he's useless
like he was told his whole life
- you'll never get anywhere
and he feels his insides begin to tear
And his head spins back to the memories of being 5 years old
being thumped so hard his insides went cold
and now he breaks out in a sweat
and his cheeks turn red
and he turns to face her
his arm outstretched.
and he lays on the bed
with his butcher knife, his best friend
- save yourself and die young
***** living, he never really was anyone
never a brother, never a son
and the only reason he had to breathe
hated him to death
so now he chokes at the thought of inhaling air
if only he hadnt opened his heart to share
***** off
***** you!
your useless. your scum. your a waste of human life.
and maybe tonight would be the night
he would stop being a waste of human life
so finally he snapped, the bolts in his had unhinged
screws flying in all directions
pulsating against his cracked skull
and he grabbed her by the hair
ripped arbitary little strands out
and pushed her down
her ribs began to crack
as he held her tight around her back
waste of life?
well i'll ***** make a new one tonight
and he finished
and she cried
- well now you know what its ***** like
to have every strand of life ripped from your insides
then he turned a knife to his spleen
and made sure this suicide was clean
and his final thought
was of his new son
and he felt a little said
'well my little baby,
i hope your a better person
then your ***** deadbeat dad'
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2008-07-24 21:26:13] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Deadbeat Daddy
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 12:37:16 PM AEST (User
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This is going to be a really difficult poem for a lot of people to stomach, but I am sure it was therapeutic for you. It is a much healthier path towards getting your feelings out than many take. |
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