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Freed
Contributed by
KismetsPoet
on
Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 11:16:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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I curl up in the darkness
Refuse to show my face
I feel my soul's been torn away
I feel I've lost the race
I feel I'm being closed in
I feel I'm about to die
I feel my skin is burning
I hear the voices lie
Am I all who's enclosed here?
Is someone here that I can't see?
Or am I trapped, alone, in darkness
No one around but me?
I long for someone's footsteps
I long for company
To break the wall
To make it fall!
And know that I am free!
But, alas, alone, I'm trapped
So deeper I'll cut, I'll bleed
The shadow's black to crimson red
And know that I've been freed
Copyright ©
KismetsPoet
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2008-07-24 11:16:53]
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Re: Freed
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by wizard on
Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 12:51:01 PM AEST
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very nice,
wiz |
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Re: Freed
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by ZiggyB on
Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 10:10:52 PM AEST
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Nice flow..an enjoyable read.
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Re: Freed
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by wheels on
Saturday, 26th July 2008 @ 10:02:00 AM AEST
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Nice in all its darkness.
kevin
the lonely vagabond
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