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My Freedom's Coming
Contributed by
GregoryGreen04
on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 03:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Stagnant pools of dying life
Dot this tree-starved land
They cover a rough and dry terrain
Like the palm of a calloused hand
I have wondered to this place
From far, far abroad
With my soul prepared
Though my heart's torn and flawed
I find a brittle yet suitable tree
And then while preparing the noose,
I think of how things will be
When, finally, I am loosed
Copyright ©
GregoryGreen04
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2003-03-17 15:20:00]
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Re: My Freedom's Coming
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 03:46:00 PM AEST
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| i think this is excellent, and i love the note, this i can appreciate:) |
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Re: My Freedom's Coming
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 04:42:27 PM AEST
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Wow this was very descriptive and well written. I liked this a lot I really did. The imagery you put in this poem is amazing.
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Re: My Freedom's Coming
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 04:54:51 PM AEST
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| What a surprise ending ... very well written ... enjoyed this one... Jan |
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Re: My Freedom's Coming
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by AngryPrincess on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 12:34:44 AM AEST
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not what i expected....or was even looking for...but great write none the less... tahnk you for sharing
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Re: My Freedom's Coming
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 07:36:00 AM AEST
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Love the imagery!! Not what I expected from the title but it is strange how fitting the title is. A monderful piece of writing!!
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