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Cinderella's Revenge
Contributed by
rania
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Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 10:42:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Cinderella had found her prince charming.
She found him at the ball, and he was a darling.
He filled her life with warmth and light,
but her sisters would not leave it without a fight.
they thought that Cinderella didn't deserve the prince,
they washed her mouth with soap and wouldn't let her rinse.
So finally one day the prince had enough!
He sent his best friends to play a bluff.
They lied to the sisters and deceited,
leaving them feeling defeated.
So finally Cinderella had her happily ever after
Leaving her life free of those disasters.
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rania
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2008-07-24 10:42:00]
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Re: Cinderella's Revenge
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by eeeitak on
Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 11:54:35 AM AEST
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| this is so cute :) i love it! especially the last two lines. great write!! |
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Re: Cinderella's Revenge
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by beautiful_letdowns on
Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 03:23:20 PM AEST
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| the soap part is really cute.. haha oh this put a smile on my face... thanks for posting :) keep posting more!! |
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Re: Cinderella's Revenge
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by rania on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 12:20:30 PM AEST
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aww thank you very much :]
i just wanted something that sounded really fun. it really didn't have to make sence too :)
it made me happy. and it was really random
but thanks for the support and im glad you enjoyed it |
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