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My Buddy Jesus
Contributed by
EloquentDegenerate
on
Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 04:41:46 AM in AEST
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You are my Jesus, My buddy Jesus
You make me happy, when times are bad
And it is so clear, If you could be here
You’d protect me from my drunk step-dad
When times are trying, my mother dying
We know you’re listening, to all our prayers
She was a dancer, now she has cancer
You created heaven to show us that you care
Cystic Fibrosis, caused my psychosis
My lung infections, cannot be cured
I can’t complain though, you also died slow
For my sins, pain on the cross you endured
I hear the talking, this poem is mocking
What is the point to, a sick story told
I don't hate Jesus, think you should see this
But this superstition that is religion has grown old
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2008-07-24 04:41:46]
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Re: My Buddy Jesus
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 04:45:38 AM AEST
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| You've expressed your anger so fluidly here. I have no words of advice or condolence, just know I feel empathetic. Well written. |
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Re: My Buddy Jesus
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by Pazzo on
Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 05:19:11 AM AEST
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| Well, no one wants to be wasting time on superstitious religion. On the other hand, I appreciate the expression of genuine and hopeful faith in Christ, even in the middle of crises. I can understand the anger and frustration, having been there all too often before. Interesting how any honest poem can say something very different from another, just as honest, written a day earlier or later. |
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Re: My Buddy Jesus
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by Pazzo on
Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 05:19:56 AM AEST
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| Well, no one wants to be wasting time on superstitious religion. On the other hand, I appreciate the expression of genuine and hopeful faith in Christ, even in the middle of crises. I can understand the anger and frustration, having been there all too often before. Interesting how any honest poem can say something very different from another, just as honest, written a day earlier or later. |
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