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Wrapped About in You
Contributed by
wheels
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Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 01:24:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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What spell does thy voice cast
A minstrel dancing fluid in the woods
Trailing green her flowing scarf
Billows as she swirls
Oh how beauty finds you
Even dressed in blue
Cast about in tresses
Wrapped about in you
Pouring out your serving
Oh the warmth of you
Treasure in the darkness
Treasured depths of you.
What within this darkness
Brown eyes so deep and blue
Lonely in their sadness
Drawing me with you
Seeing ever more
A love…
A gift…
A light…
Trapping in their marrow
A fawn within your stare
Though brief within a glance
Letting down your hair.
Oh what potion t’is you have
What wizard helps you cast
Stirring in the darkness
Lifting us our past
Drops upon the well
Welling up to sear
Burning out our sadness
Lifting us our fears
Walking thus thy ghosts
Nevermore to haunt
Lost now in this space
Pulling me in you
Kissing ever gentle
Gentle on your face
Kissing ever gentle
Gentle into you.
Hidden in the forest
A brook bubbles thus with life
Chuckles over boulders
Washing down your shoulders
Kissing them with sighs
Stepping in your shallows
Diving in your pools
Mixing in your cauldron
Naught just a witches brew
Me the final pinch…
The final dash
Mixing in your heart
Healing both at last.
God has cast you well
Spelling you in my arms
A prayer said as one
Though two hearts…
Separate have it sung
Filling us this beauty
To mingle us as one
An angel in a princess
A princess in my arms
To touch…
To heal…
To bless you
My gift returned to you
Smiling in the darkness
Sees me smiling too.
Copyright ©
wheels
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2008-07-24 01:24:39]
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Re: Wrapped About in You
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by wizard on
Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 01:50:55 AM AEST
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awesome write, great imagery, i loved it,
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Re: Wrapped About in You
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 04:41:07 AM AEST
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| Wow, I really like this Wheels. What a gift to poetry. |
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Re: Wrapped About in You
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by shelby on
Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 11:09:08 AM AEST
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Kevin the touch of this could bring tears to the eyes, you have such an incredible gift to move all with your words.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Wrapped About in You
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 01:41:49 PM AEST
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Kevin,
Another amazing write. Your words paint a
masterpiece that even the greatest artists
could not paint.
"An angel in a princess
A princess in my arms"
Perfect words, as is all of this piece
Amazing.........Mike |
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Re: Wrapped About in You
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by Crow on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 01:21:43 AM AEST
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| wheels you make a tired old heart wake with your poetry. somewhere way back in the world I remember this love. excellent read for me...Crow |
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Re: Wrapped About in You
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 05:33:13 AM AEST
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There is a movement in this that dares your reader to dwell in the awe of a moment so gloriously splendid, it
could trap the hardest heart and mold it anew- open to the wonder and dazzle of love and desire. This is a tremendously
lovely piece, Kevin. Wrapped about in you could mean so many things. I love that you've captured an essence,
but not locked it away so tightly that others may not trespass inside to feel the coolness of it's misty breath
soothing their heated skin. It's like a fresh breeze on a very humid day. It's like a dip in the bluest waters
when the sun is highest and at it's most scorching. It's like a comfort that few find and even less share. And it
is tremendous, my friend. A gorgeous work of art to display on your home page. Your emotion spreads wide
and engulfs any and all within it's path. Damn fine writing, my friend. A splendid world of emotion and colour.
Beautifully haunting ~
~ Breezy
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