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The Greydom Age
Contributed by
beautiful_letdowns
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Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 03:16:53 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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The dreams are now static
The love is all gone
All that was once right
Has now been wronged
The static is overbearing
The clocks have lost their time
Religion now is blurred and obscured
The congregation has lost it’s mind
The people pick
The people choose
Which rules to throw
Which rules to use
The stranger enters from stage left
The friend exits stage right
Things are very grey nowadays
Nothing is black and white
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2008-07-23 15:16:53]
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Re: The Greydom Age
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by shelby on
Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 02:59:43 PM AEST
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I adored this write, it is not only well constructed but sage in its wisdom so true so true.......
Pick and choose oh yes .....
Love your screen name BTW
I will look for more of your work.
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Re: The Greydom Age
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by wheels on
Saturday, 26th July 2008 @ 09:22:35 AM AEST
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Straight forward but true. Nice work.
--kevin
the lonely vagabond
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