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My Sweet Michelle
Contributed by
wheels
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Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 11:11:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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My first vision of you…
All dressed in hair raven black with dew
Dripping from your voice
A bird within your breast
Singing out its muse.
Enchanted mistress I must ask
God’s grace the gift you have
Full the kindness in your heart
Must your friendship never part
Your kindness from my own.
My Michelle in sweet repose
Nestles on my branch
Warming thus the meadow
Of blue and lonely souls.
Yes…
My sweet Michelle
Taking off in flight
Weaving out her loving prose
Sewn in golden threads
Born within her heart.
Oh my dear… dear… sweet friend
Nestled softly in this nest
Deep within thy breast
Forever there to keep
Forever there to hold
Your heart upon my soul.
--thank you my dear friend
Kevin - the lonely vagabond
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2008-07-23 11:11:17]
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Re: My Sweet Michelle
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 12:22:26 PM AEST
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very nice... beautiful in every way.
nice job,
wiz |
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Re: My Sweet Michelle
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by Crow on
Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 12:24:46 AM AEST
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| it is a pleasure to read your beautiful poetry describing your friend, and a look inside your heart,..and vision. Crow |
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Re: My Sweet Michelle
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 12:44:33 AM AEST
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aww this is a beautiful dedication.. and its so pretty.. I really liked this poem.. its lovely
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: My Sweet Michelle
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 04:53:37 AM AEST
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| Oh, what a sweet ode from one talented poet to another. I believe you two speak each other's language. |
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Re: My Sweet Michelle
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by shelby on
Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 09:42:24 AM AEST
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Kevin,
I just came on and what a surprise I got.
This is beauty at its finest, the verse so lovely.
Thanks so much for this my dear sweet Kevin.
It is also nice to know you are smiling once again.
Huge hugs and kisses
damn I might cry happy tears *smiles*
thanks so much |
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