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Dreamers
Contributed by
KismetsPoet
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Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 10:56:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Lovers dream of kisses
The poor man dreams of gold
Soldiers dream of wartime
Their dreams are often told
The children dream of playtime
The cellmates dream they're free
The deaf man dreams of hearing
The blind dream they can see
The spirits dream of living
The victims dream they die
And dreamers dream of dreaming
Though dreamers often lie
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Re: Dreamers
(User Rating: 1 ) by breezyweezy on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 10:59:41 AM AEST (User
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i think this is one of the best poems ive red in a long time... thank you |
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Re: Dreamers
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 11:01:50 AM AEST (User
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Lovely poem, it flows well and the message is super.
Michelle |
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Re: Dreamers
(User Rating: 1 ) by eeeitak on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 12:11:46 PM AEST (User
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"i dreamt a dream tonight / and so did i / well, what was yours? / that dreamers often lie / in bed asleep while they do dream things true"
one of my favorite shakespeare quotes ever.
i love this poem, its beautiful!! especially the last stanza. great write :) |
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Re: Dreamers
(User Rating: 1 ) by wizard on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 12:29:04 PM AEST (User
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nice job,
great flow... never stop dreaming :)
wiz |
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Re: Dreamers
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 04:58:30 AM AEST (User
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I really liked this poem a lot. It seems both simple and profound. Well done. |
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Re: Dreamers
(User Rating: 1 ) by wheels on
Saturday, 26th July 2008 @ 09:56:28 AM AEST (User
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Yes, I agree simple straightforward but very well written and nicely philisophical
kevin
--the lonely vagabond |
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Re: Dreamers
(User Rating: 1 ) by calebcrain on
Thursday, 31st July 2008 @ 02:07:22 PM AEST (User
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i really enjoyed reading this poem
although i fail to see how dreamers are often liars maybe i just dont get it
good poem anyway i loved it. |
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