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Depressed Ghost
Contributed by
TundraHydra
on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 02:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Does everyone have more fun when I'm not around
When I'm seen do less people smile than those who frown
Some say "He's a cool guy, someone we have fun with"
Most say "He's a loner, an anti-socialist, a piece of *****"
Is my existance a shadow on your reality
Have my negative words caused a fatality
Maybe it would be better if I never was
Living in this world of confused emotions
The emotional overload is too much for me
So I shut it away where no one else can see
And no one does see it, only a black hole for feelings remains
But every black hole that sucks up matter has to hold it in
I can only hold mine in vain
For in time I will cease to be a nether wraith
And become a flaming inferno of emotions
But only for a time, just enough to empty them out
Then I will revert to my dark shade form
Holding it all inside, never letting it go
So people think I don't care cause I never show
My feelings in front of them
They come to know me as the Depressed Ghost
I say this not to boast, just to open further the eyes of those I love most
Copyright ©
TundraHydra
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2003-03-17 14:20:00]
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Re: Depressed Ghost
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 10:06:50 PM AEST
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| AAAHHH Truly a good write,you need to let your feeling show at times! Christina |
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Re: Depressed Ghost
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 07:27:20 AM AEST
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Wow! This has to be my favourite of all your works so far. Wonderful imagery!!
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