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Ordinary Person
Contributed by
Thespia
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Tuesday, 22nd July 2008 @ 06:30:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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We are all the same,
going about our normal lives,
saying were happy, everythings fine,
when really, we are all dying inside.
I see your pain, as you see mine,
two ordinary people, lost in this ordinary time.
I look into your eyes and tell you, your special,
you mean more than the world to me.
Emotional tears fall. Open your heart,
perhaps then I can make you see.
To the world we are nothing,
just two people, living but dead.
To eachother we are the world,
touching, tasting, nothing need be said.
All I ask is for your trust,
and ill give you love, with no strings.
I promise you, my ordinary boy,
with me you will experience, extra-ordinary things.
Copyright ©
Thespia
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2008-07-22 18:30:18]
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Re: Ordinary Person
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by DjFreshmatic on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2008 @ 08:08:19 PM AEST
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| I really liked your poem it sounds like something I would of write very good |
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Re: Ordinary Person
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2008 @ 11:37:57 PM AEST
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Hi Sarah,
This is really deep... The first stanza drew me in..and the last line had me smiling.... Nothing ordinary about this write, my friend...
Jenni |
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Re: Ordinary Person
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by Bubbles02 on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 12:40:04 PM AEST
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| I loved the last 2 lines! They were so cute. Nice job. |
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Re: Ordinary Person
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by humanity on
Monday, 28th June 2010 @ 05:51:14 PM AEST
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| beautiful, very touching. |
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