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Walk On Me
Contributed by
freckle
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Tuesday, 22nd July 2008 @ 01:17:18 PM in AEST
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Do not walk behind me, or besides me
And definately not in front of me
For if you walk behind me,
you'll have to always watch my back
we both know, you can't handle that
For if you walk besides me,
we would be considered equals
you have made it clear, you are supreme
For if you walk in front of me,
you couldn't really trust me
we both know, I'd run
But if you walk on me
things will be the same as always
and we'll each know our place.
Carol Sossaman 7/21/08
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2008-07-22 13:17:18]
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Re: Walk On Me
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by fielding88 on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2008 @ 04:56:17 PM AEST
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| I like the lessons you conveyed with this poem, I thought they were very poetic and quite insightful. It was a very interesting read and gives the reader something they can truly ponder. Wonderful write. |
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Re: Walk On Me
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 01:38:22 AM AEST
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| I like this. It is a new take on the quote, "Don't walk behind me, I may not lead. Don't walk in front of me, I may not follow. Just walk beside me and be my friend." It is clear that the subject is not your friend and you are tired of how you've been treated. Very expressive and a nice write overall. |
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Re: Walk On Me
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 02:11:22 AM AEST
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In complete agreement with Mark on this one. Definitely food for thought. Very wonderful flow. Nice piece.
Peace
~Shannon
*who most definitely knows what it is to be walked on* |
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