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I like the softness from your fingers
Contributed by
holy
on
Monday, 21st July 2008 @ 03:42:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I like the softness from your fingers
It is 22:00 o'clock
you tell me you are going to set up a telephone,
"Haha,
you can be very free to phone me,
any time,
any word,
even at midnight."
"Of course I can!
I love it!"
I am very pleased to hear that.
"Indeed,
when my boss knew we would move here,
she said she would set up a telephone for me,
but I refused politely,"
I add it casualy.
You smile with push my head,
"Haha,
how didn't tell me?
why not?
It's a foolish of you!
If I was you......"
"Hi,
don't rough up my hair.
Haha,
All the world knows,
you are very avaricious."
I pat your nose......
"Don't forget to say an enthusiastic:
thank you!"
a smile on your face with a cheer,
"Stop game,
good sleep!"
You are always bring warmth and happiness to me,
a interesting story,
a smile face,
a funny word,
it is enough for me to forget all the sorrows and pains.
Believe,
I am deeply loved and cared about.
Living in our new room,
I am really pleased.
looking at your funny face,
it looks as if you were sleeping.
listening to your loud snores,
it looks as if a free bird in the tree are singing.
I am stating,
I am drinking,
I am smiling,
I put your hands in my hands,
I like the softness from your finger.
For me,
at the moment,
I perfer not to think about the future......
Copyright ©
holy
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2008-07-21 15:42:06]
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Re: I like the softness from your fingers
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by carpediem on
Monday, 21st July 2008 @ 04:29:12 PM AEST
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| I love the originality of this piece. A very common feeling expressed beautifuly in a rather uncommon structure. Brilliant. The diversity of the way things are expressed is what I think makes poetry so captivating. This is a great write. |
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Re: I like the softness from your fingers
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by shelby on
Monday, 21st July 2008 @ 04:44:20 PM AEST
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Oh this made me smile, every one of these are always so fun and touching.
Hugs
Michelle |
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