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The Wall
Contributed by
jessb3
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Monday, 21st July 2008 @ 12:04:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A fortress built so strong and tall
Surrounds the man within
The solid doors are locked and barred
No way of getting in
I look up at the cold, stone wall
I want to run away
But when I think of whose inside
I cannot help but stay
I pick and poke around the wall
There are no cracks to see
I check the lock upon the door
But know I’ll need a key
I touch and prod and nudge and push
The wall seems made of lead
Then from up high a rock falls free
And hits me on the head
The wound from being harshly struck
I know it will remain
For now I give up on the wall
One day I’ll try again
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jessb3
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2008-07-21 12:04:51]
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Re: The Wall
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by wizard on
Monday, 21st July 2008 @ 01:55:02 PM AEST
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nice write, if the wall wasn't so difficult to scale, it wouldn't be worth the effort ... never give up!
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Re: The Wall
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by AnenaLynne on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2008 @ 03:57:36 AM AEST
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wow. this was so incredibly well written and entirely true. i loved it.
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Re: The Wall
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 05:41:33 AM AEST
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| this was very well written and flows nicely. i know you can climb that wall! ^^ |
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