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Dont cry to long
Contributed by
shelby
on
Sunday, 20th July 2008 @ 03:35:42 PM in AEST
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Don稚 cry to long now that I知 gone
Life goes on live on for me
Spread your wings and rise above this
One day soon again we値l see.
Heaven called me and I went willing.
My pain on earth is all done.
Remember me with that sweet smile
Know Im not really gone.
I知 free to fly the mountains and the valleys.
No hurt or pain, I知 free to roam
say a far well but never goodbye honey
I知 resting till I see you again.
Heaven called me and I went willing
My pain on earth is all done
Remember me with that sweet smile
Know I知 not really gone.
Copyright ﾂｩ
shelby
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2008-07-20 15:35:42]
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Re: Dont cry to long
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by sorrowsofabrokenheart on
Sunday, 20th July 2008 @ 04:46:26 PM AEST
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| i think when we pass we all feel this way. but i love how you captured a moment and brought it out with out experiencesing it 100% yourself. i believe its one thing to express yourself but another to express another. its what i think seys apart the great from the legends. |
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Re: Dont cry to long
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 20th July 2008 @ 11:09:57 PM AEST
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softly beautiful...He loves it I know and he is smiling on you right now
Hugs
Shari |
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Re: Dont cry to long
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by funnyface09 on
Sunday, 20th July 2008 @ 11:41:27 PM AEST
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i am sure your words are exactly your uncle words...it was sad,soft and very,very beautiful..i hope you get some melodies to it..it will make a very beautiful song..
take care,my friend.. |
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Re: Dont cry to long
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Monday, 21st July 2008 @ 09:56:47 AM AEST
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| Sorry to hear of your uncle's passing, You still have the great talent of writing from the heart, thanks for sharing, Take care, Valerie |
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Re: Dont cry to long
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by ingeniusidiot on
Monday, 21st July 2008 @ 09:07:13 PM AEST
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I could say this about my grandmother who is expected to pass any day now....beautfully done as always.
Rich |
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