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Bleeding Love
Contributed by
KismetsPoet
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Sunday, 20th July 2008 @ 08:35:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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You left, then you came back
You came back!
And I'm so happy
Though all you do is lie there
Lie there, still
Please move, my love
Open your gorgeous eyes
Why won't you talk, my darling?
You came back, you must love me
You must, you must move
Can you not forget her?
That slut you left me for
She's gone now, cherie
I made sure, she's gone
The doctors all say so
What's that on you, amour?
That red flowing on you
That covers your eye lids
Looks like tears of blood
Is it blood? Please say no
It flows from your head like water
Why is it there, sweet love?
Can you not forget her?!
Can you not love me?!
I guess you can't, beloved
So, say good-bye forever
Bye forever, bye, my sweetheart
Bye, my dying, bleeding love
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Re: Bleeding Love
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by wizard on
Sunday, 20th July 2008 @ 01:26:26 PM AEST
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crazy... i love it
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Re: Bleeding Love
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by wheels on
Saturday, 26th July 2008 @ 09:38:36 AM AEST
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yes it has a twist, but a rendering of pain returning him hte same. by the third stanza I had tears within my eyes. the madness of the pain brings evils to our sights a fantasy of sorts.
Nice agian. I like your flow and meter
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Re: Bleeding Love
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by Cayleigh-Chan on
Wednesday, 30th July 2008 @ 11:26:57 PM AEST
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The last stanza is beautiful,
and sad.
I think I would go crazy to if I killed my love,
so, I feel ya!
Keep up the good work.
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