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~Twinkle Twinkle~
Contributed by
shelby
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Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 03:27:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Are you ready for an adventure?
Meet near the old oak tree.
Bought the strike of midnight
lets go sail just you and me.
We could take a little nap sack
and gather up the star-dust
spread the magic around us
off to the milky way we would go.
Float with the stars lining Heavens doorway.
Tell our secrets to the moon.
Bask in the glittering twilight
morn could come to soon.
So what do you say about it?
Would you like to come along
we could be the light and twinkle
make a brand new song.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-07-19 15:27:50]
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Re: ~Twinkle Twinkle~
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 03:37:59 PM AEST
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aww this is just so mystical.. I just loved this write.. its so adventerous lovely one
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: ~Twinkle Twinkle~
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 03:45:22 PM AEST
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| Wow, I love this. It is so free and feel-good... and romantic! The imagery is perfect and I imagine the words spoken with a sly smile. Thank you! |
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Re: ~Twinkle Twinkle~
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by NoSaint on
Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 06:49:11 PM AEST
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shine on little star
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Re: ~Twinkle Twinkle~
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st July 2008 @ 12:56:49 PM AEST
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Sweet little piece Michelle. The imagery is
wonderful.
'Tell our secrets to the moon'
Fits this piece so well. It gives one
butterflies inside......Mike |
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Re: ~Twinkle Twinkle~
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by breezyweezy on
Monday, 21st July 2008 @ 01:13:28 PM AEST
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this is a cute poem, good job
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Re: ~Twinkle Twinkle~
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by ingeniusidiot on
Monday, 21st July 2008 @ 09:04:19 PM AEST
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Pretty little piece...sounds like a place I would love to go to escape from everything for a while. This was beautiful.
Rich |
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