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Slivered Souls
Contributed by
shelby
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Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 02:36:34 PM in AEST
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Do not cover your eye’s.
Take a moment
look intently rest inside the lonely soul
feel the brush of blue seated there
speak of, then know of stone.
Slivers of hearts broken,
shattered in a frosty breath.
Left to lay alone
on broken uneven cement
where people step careless each day.
No knowing, caring or feeling the pain that rests there.
Do not cover your eyes,
look intently
there are lost souls near you
wanting to rest inside your soul
and take in a second look
as they brush up the scattered pieces
from an uneven sidewalk.
Copyright ©
shelby
... [
2008-07-19 14:36:34]
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Re: Slivered Souls
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by Crow on
Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 02:40:46 PM AEST
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damn Shel this is awesome, great work
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Re: Slivered Souls
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 03:42:42 PM AEST
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this is just full of wisdom and I loved the wording in this.. great job here .. enchanting from you as always
rock on,
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Re: Slivered Souls
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by NoSaint on
Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 06:51:22 PM AEST
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strong write my friends well done
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Re: Slivered Souls
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by ingeniusidiot on
Monday, 21st July 2008 @ 09:01:06 PM AEST
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nice job my friend. intense as always.
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