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These holes in my walls
Contributed by
xxILoveTheSilencexx
on
Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 01:23:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Living more than one day in a life like this, is something only the strong can do.
I guess you could say that is everyone who is alive today.
Everyday makes us stronger, the death we all want will be held off a while longer.
These holes in my walls, I made with a hammer.
I didn't want to do it, but it was still my fault.
He made me to do this and that...blah blah blah, and now from his grave he laughs.
I've become stronger, but still not strong enough.
Does it seem to anyone else, that life is to tough?
I tried to fill the holes with you, and them, and everyone, but they just made them a little bit bigger.
They say I killed her, you said it wasn't true, but now I don't believe you.
It was me, all my fault, this bitter taste on my tounge, tastes a bit like salt.
Both dead, our little trio almost gone, sooner or later I must join along.
With us gone, the memories won't be far along, soon they will be forgotten.
Like the holes collapsing the walls of my soul, I soon must fall, and join the rest of them all.
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xxILoveTheSilencexx
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2008-07-19 13:23:02]
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Re: These holes in my walls
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by jive_shaman on
Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 01:41:15 PM AEST
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| if you wrote a poem every time you were angry instead of putting holes in your walls you would save a lot of money on plaster. |
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Re: These holes in my walls
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 03:44:13 PM AEST
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you have great expression of anger.. I agree with the above post.. try to find ways to let out your anger other than putting holes in your wall.. but this is good expression
rock on,
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Re: These holes in my walls
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by wizard on
Monday, 21st July 2008 @ 04:06:57 AM AEST
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nicely done...i can feel your pain
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