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Worse Than Most
Contributed by
MissTeenSuicide
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Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 09:07:10 AM in AEST
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It seems this is not the worst of lives
But to me it comes pretty close
Bad enough to want to compromise
And a lot than the most
Maybe I'm looking at this
In the wrong way
Seeing my world ruled with an iron fist
And I don't have a say
I've heard of worse personally
I even leant my shoulder
I know they're pain and what they see
To them life seems much colder
It doesn't make me feel better
About my life or about myself
I keep my feelings in an unopened letter
Hiding my secrets on the highest shelf
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MissTeenSuicide
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2008-07-19 09:07:10]
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Re: Worse Than Most
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by wheels on
Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 09:33:20 AM AEST
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I love that last stanza - wonderful.
Kevin
--the lonely vagabond |
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Re: Worse Than Most
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 03:49:28 PM AEST
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| I agree, the last stanza is a gem. Keep pushing through it, you'll be fine. |
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