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Steps of Recovery
Contributed by
deadwriter
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Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 02:08:37 AM in AEST
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Steps of Recovery
With the news of my death the moon went dark
Soft orchestra music could be heard in the park
The one friend that I had left on the earth
Introduced my replacement by giving birth
For when one person dies and leaves this place
Another one is born to fill the empty space
The gentle music gave way to loud cheers
As with me gone they could forget some of their fears
No longer would I be here trying to be their friend
No more words of encouragement would I continually send
No more broken hearts would I be here to mend
No more fighting for the innocent to defend
I know with the new morning’s light
All of the wrongs I have done will not be right
But with time most wounds have a way of healing
I believe soon, much better you will be feeling
Deadwriter
07/17/2008
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Re: Steps of Recovery
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by shelby on
Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 02:01:04 PM AEST
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My friend such a touching and profound write, you filled me up with this one.
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Michelle |
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Re: Steps of Recovery
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 21st July 2008 @ 01:23:34 PM AEST
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Very painful to read, Deadwriter.... but written so well ....
Hugs
Jennifer |
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Re: Steps of Recovery
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by Muinanyere on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 10:09:02 AM AEST
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| I am glad you are here, your messages make me smile and make me feel like someone cares. Beautiful write and too sad to describe. I am here if you need me friend. |
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Re: Steps of Recovery
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th August 2008 @ 07:47:06 AM AEST
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| I agree with with the rest here, by that I mean the bitterness in this is hard to read, but you must realize how much you would be missed if you should ever leave... |
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Re: Steps of Recovery
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 8th September 2008 @ 04:18:46 AM AEST
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i feel much the same my self these days, i loved this poem... it is beautifully simply gently written...
hugs n' love nessa |
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