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Fear
Contributed by
Thespia
on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 08:20:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Pull me down now, hold me close,
so together we can rise,
far above this cold cruel city
where dead souls fill the sky.
I Taste you in my dreams,
as you fall far away
Tracing your name in stone
I ask, if you want me to stay.
Confusion fills your big brown eyes,
do you know what you want life to be?
I read your verse and my heart knows,
the others, they are no different from me.
I fear the past
I fear the pain
I fear the misty morning rain.
I fear your love,
so lost in time
and wonder if forever,
you will be mine.
Copyright ©
Thespia
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2008-07-18 20:20:20]
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Re: Fear
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by catz77 on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 09:44:18 PM AEST
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Something in this stirred me. Obviously good emotionally.
Great write.
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Re: Fear
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by wizard on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 11:01:08 PM AEST
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there is so much to fear ... yet nothing is worth the effort,,,
nicely done,
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Re: Fear
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 06:59:24 AM AEST
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When something flows well it seems as it is was effortless to write.
I know that you put a lot of thought into this to make it seem that way though
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