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heavens burning away
Contributed by
sorrowsofabrokenheart
on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 05:16:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
war
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I watch the stars fade behind a wall of fire
Heavens burning away
Tonight the shadows take hold of earth
And mans reduced to a parasite
Destroying his own creations
Bombs blacking out the hope of sunrise
So sleep tight my children tomorrow never comes
For war between beasts steal our dreams
This is so sickening, we live in fear of ourselves
Sending sons and daughters to die
Just to prove all we have said is a lie
Come now witness truth
Stand in the remains of what we conquer
Build from its chard surface, then watch it fall again
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2008-07-18 17:16:46]
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Re: heavens burning away
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by holy on
Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 03:21:53 PM AEST
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| Durning the war people suffered many hardships, let war go away from the world, we like peace!Great job, I love what you express...... |
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Re: heavens burning away
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by shelby on
Sunday, 20th July 2008 @ 04:25:51 PM AEST
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This really reached out and went right to my heart.
I loved the entire write.
Come witness truth......... strong right there.
Wonderful work.......
I agree we need unity and no more war!
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Re: heavens burning away
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2008 @ 01:12:44 PM AEST
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Very deep and troubling write....Well done...
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