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rusty love
Contributed by
maha_ak49
on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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i'm a wooden sandal,
you're leather shoes,
can i pair you,
wood will rust,
leather still shines,
providing hope,
to the rusty one,
in life,
good pair praised,
mixing is hammered,
right pair makes,
harmonious sound,
wood will one day,
transform,
to call leather,
be its pair,
no bond can,
break us.
Copyright ©
maha_ak49
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2003-03-17 11:00:00]
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Re: rusty love
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 05:50:43 AM AEST
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Very strange. Not quite sure why you have compared shoes to love but still.
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Re: rusty love
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by maha_ak49 on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 12:16:42 AM AEST
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| hey learn the poem first.by the way thanks. |
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Re: rusty love
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by soul_je on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 08:45:36 AM AEST
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| Yo!! Tan here. Not bad really!! |
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Re: rusty love
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 06:00:12 PM AEST
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Good and interesting write....
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