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Only In dreams

Contributed by Phantomvampyress on Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 03:15:34 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Outside pale blue
seeing no traces of who we once were
just the footprints on the steps left over
trying to cover up the scars, where it hurts
but it still bleeds where no one sees
begging to be seen

wounds like these only
heal in dreams

*Vampyress JENNI*




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Re: Only In dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by britt8812180 on Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 03:20:15 PM AEST
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such a true meaning poem i like it a lot ^^


Re: Only In dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by wheels on Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 04:20:05 PM AEST
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very nice Jenni. Short but nice imagery and the thoughts well written ...begging to be seen.

--Kevin
the lonely vagabond


Re: Only In dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by sorrowsofabrokenheart on Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 05:27:50 PM AEST
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very expressive and emotional for such a short poem. I love the truth in it though the way it captures the reader attention while staying original.


Re: Only In dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 06:00:20 PM AEST
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Sad but great writing.
huggs, blessings,
emy


Re: Only In dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 08:02:16 AM AEST
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it still bleeds where no one sees
begging to be seen

I understand this perfectly. When I read writes that are short, quick and powerful I think of my friend that once told me..." the beautiful broken heart" Crow


Re: Only In dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 02:15:07 PM AEST
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Oh Jen, outside pale blue
bleeds where no one sees god woman that is so powerful you captured such an emotional work here.

Hugs
Michelle


Re: Only In dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by holy on Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 03:24:32 PM AEST
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Thank you for your comment, I am happy to share your mood too.


Re: Only In dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Sunday, 20th July 2008 @ 01:34:43 PM AEST
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great write...

the emotion shines through nicely....

wiz


Re: Only In dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 22nd July 2008 @ 01:19:59 PM AEST
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Amazing how one can say so much with so few words..... Well written, Jenni..
Jenni :>)


Re: Only In dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by eeeitak on Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 11:32:58 AM AEST
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this is so sad, and gorgeous. you're very talented!


Re: Only In dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Muinanyere on Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 12:02:57 PM AEST
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wounds like these only
heal in dreams

So much said in such a short poem, brilliantly written


Re: Only In dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 10:49:09 AM AEST
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" wounds like these only
heal in dreams "

Jenn this is so touching,

you say so much so deeply

with your few words, but then

pain isn't hard to read is it

now? this is absolutely

stunning, as always your

style but most of all, the

artist that comes through

in your lovely tell all poetry . . .




Ben


Re: Only In dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 1st October 2008 @ 08:36:41 AM AEST
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Jenni~
An emotionally packed write you have
here dear poetess. You say so much
in so little words. You always deliver
a most powerful and meaningful write
dearest Jen~
I have missed you and your wonderful
writes my dear friend. Keep up the great work.
huge hugs,
sue m




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