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Take a bow to our parents
Contributed by
holy
on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 02:44:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Take a bow to our parents
Dear parents,
I love you,
please accept the bow from your daughter-in-law.
Time is flies quickly,
we have lived together for seven years,
our life was unadulterated bliss.
you always see me like a dearest daughter of your own,
show your understanding and love,
I don't know how to express my love but taking a bow......
Our brother is going to marry,
we had to leave you for living on our own,
our move will be on January 12,1996.
Yes,
the day is our 7th wedding anniversary,
I am grateful fo all our family......
How hope you can live with us,
but you told me our family have many things need you.
It is nice we will still live in the same city,
there is only 50 minutes's walk from our home,
so it is really good for us to take great care of you,
we will often come back to feel your love......
The New Year is coming,
I will be very glad if you can spend the New Year with us.
Now,
I want to say what I wanted to say,
"I love you,
my dearest father!
I love you,
my dearest mother!"
I know,
we are always the little children in your eyes,
wherever we go,
you will be very worried about us,
Let us learn to face every difficulty ourself,
as we grow older,
we will try our best on the uncertainty of life......
Thank you again,
take good care of yourself.
Take a bow again,
please accept it.
please believe,
we can take care of ourself too.
Yes,
we will often come to visit you,
I love you......
Copyright ©
holy
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2008-07-18 14:44:35]
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Re: Take a bow to our parents
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 03:11:47 PM AEST
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i like how you took a creative approach to this.. its very interesting and full of feeling.. I really liked the flow.. good job here
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Take a bow to our parents
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by sorrowsofabrokenheart on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 05:22:48 PM AEST
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| brilliant. love how you were more worried about getting yout feelings acrossed and sharing your thoughts then fill mold of what most see to be poetry. you didnt force it to ryhme. you just let it speak for you. that is what poetry is about. |
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