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Lullaby
Contributed by
wizard
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Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 02:19:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Today a fragile summers dream
One fit to use as lovers deem,
Held in refined lofty esteem;
Emotions stir as lovers teem.
This song sung by a maiden fair
A tune she spreads throughout the air
Recurring nightly without care,
Bestowed to wash away despair.
Tonight her hushing lullaby
Sung with her warm and tender sigh,
Transcends the blushing midnight sky…
Evoking dreams of days gone by.
She dances on an angel’s wings…
Upon the stars her beauty clings.
Across the sky her music rings
While halos glimmer as she sings.
As days are sought so shall we find
A softer day, gentler and kind,
Soon these hearts shall forever bind,
With dreams that have been silver lined.
Copyright ©
wizard
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2008-07-18 14:19:24]
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Re: Lullaby
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 03:10:26 PM AEST
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wow passionate and intensly deep.. enchanting
rock on,
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Re: Lullaby
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by wheels on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 04:17:30 PM AEST
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Very nice Wizard. The final stanza really ties it together well.
--Kevin
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Re: Lullaby
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by sorrowsofabrokenheart on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 05:25:16 PM AEST
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| great poem. it flowed well and had deep emotion in ever line. |
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Re: Lullaby
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by emystar on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 06:07:41 PM AEST
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Very creative and beautifull.
huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Lullaby
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by ediii on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 06:57:40 PM AEST
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| good rhythm, flowed well, rolls of a tongue in a nice manner. as to the images, no offense, i find them a bit naive/exhausted/usual. |
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Re: Lullaby
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by catz77 on
Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 05:59:00 AM AEST
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Beautiful write, wizard. I think the imagery is just fine. ^_^
Keep writing so I can keep reading.
catz |
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Re: Lullaby
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th July 2008 @ 01:09:31 PM AEST
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| This is beautiful and brings hope that there will be a softer day. Your word choice and imagery are inspiring and it is wonderful to read something kind and romantic. |
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Re: Lullaby
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2008 @ 01:54:09 PM AEST
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Mesmerizing is the word which comes to mind after reading this...
Loved it..
Jenni |
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Re: Lullaby
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by eeeitak on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 11:28:18 AM AEST
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| i always really love your poems. this is great :) |
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Re: Lullaby
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by Lovingangel4u on
Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 09:34:57 PM AEST
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| Its all been said, what a beautiful poem for me wispery lovely images, a wonderful write.
~Lovingangel4u~ |
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Re: Lullaby
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 5th August 2008 @ 02:59:42 PM AEST
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I cant believe I missed this.
She dances on an angel’s wings…
Upon the stars her beauty clings.
Across the sky her music rings
While halos glimmer as she sings.
lovely work this poem sings. Nothing I say will do it justice I enjoyed it.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Lullaby
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 10:51:21 AM AEST
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Hey Wiz, it's great to once again stop by your pages and read your superb and never disappointing writes.
You have always had a beautiful poetic way of putting what's in your heart and mind onto the page. This is a beautiful, hopeful and uplifting write gorgeously penned. Beautifully crafted. Thanks for sharing.
huge hugs,
Sue M |
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Re: Lullaby
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by Spike on
Sunday, 17th August 2008 @ 08:38:02 PM AEST
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Wiz,
the AA BB rhyme scheme works well here. An entrancing write, and magical subject.
Spike |
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Re: Lullaby
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by LauraMary on
Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 06:21:15 AM AEST
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You most definitely are a true, true artist.
Well done. |
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Re: Lullaby
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 12th September 2008 @ 02:00:37 PM AEST
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really pretty, a beautiful poem,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Lullaby
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by Shandra on
Saturday, 2nd April 2011 @ 07:47:22 AM AEST
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| Beautiful, just like a lullaby. Great write!! I really enjoyed it, ; ) |
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