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Lies
Contributed by
KismetsPoet
on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 02:49:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Bloodred tears on broken trust
Pools of memories, sky of dust
Waves of poison, dreams of you
The words you spoke were never true
The flames, they rise
I'm going to die
I hear your voice, your words, they lie
I hear the sobs, I think they're mine
I'm out of life, I'm out of time
My mind is blank, my heart is cold
You realize you've solen my soul?
There's angry voices in my head
Voices injured, voices dead
I shall join them, we are one
The moon has now eclipsed the sun
Head spinning around
I'm going to drown
I'll reach up and grab you and I'll drag you down
Reach up from the water, reach up from the ground
Reach up from the flames that keep twirling around
Reach up from the poison, from the dreams of you
Crawl up from the lies, from the words never true
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KismetsPoet
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2008-07-18 02:49:34]
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Re: Lies
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by elle on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 09:39:08 AM AEST
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| very intense. . .& I like it. peace elle |
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Re: Lies
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by shelby on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 09:58:24 AM AEST
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Intense write is right, you seem like I know you somehow, you been here before? You write like someone who used to be here.
Great write presented nicely
Michelle |
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Re: Lies
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 11:07:32 AM AEST
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Holy hell!!! Intense was the PERFECT word! I'll third that!
What an amazingly dark and delicious write! You've reached deep for
emotions of this magnitude and displayed them so vividly! I just ADORE the
last four lines. WOW! Powerfully exact!
GREAT post!!
~Breezy
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