Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	22-November 06:26:04 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

just waiting for my thread to break

Contributed by xxILoveTheSilencexx on Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 02:20:55 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Stars shine, they seem brighter tonight.

Sitting here, alone, on my roof, wishing you were mine.

Holding you close, tracing each scar on your skin.

Memorizing each line of your face, I guess I just didn't win the race.

The race against time, the race to win your heart, how can I keep from falling apart?

Do I turn around and keep holding on?

Just by a thread of hope?

why is that all I recieve as aposed to her who has a full rope?

Or do I move on, onto a new life with a brand new dawn?

We both know what I should choose, but we also know that I will sit here and take your abuse.

Each day I slip farther and farther down waiting for my thread to break, I cry out for you, don't you ever hear the sound?

Do you know what it feels like, to feel your heart rip?

That feeling you get just as you trip.

Sometimes I wake up screaming your name, and then I remember it's all just a filthy game.

A game that no one will win, did you know that lying is a sin?

You'll break her heart too, I just hope she realizes it like I do.

I hope she hurts you, I hope she breaks your heart.

then you'll know what it feels like to rebuild your heart from the start.

I'm just barely holding on right now, waiting for my thread to break.

Copyright © xxILoveTheSilencexx ... [ 2008-07-18 02:20:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: just waiting for my thread to break (User Rating: 1 )
by recklessguy on Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 02:40:11 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Slow down girl no race to win, love will carry on.
Poem is tops.

Reck

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com