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Tainted Charm
Contributed by
MissTeenSuicide
on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 12:08:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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These bodies pop out of the ground
With such a terrible, gut wrenching sound
They all rise to stand around me
The most terror my eyes have seen to surround me
Talking, commanding, requesting and asking
Their voices echoed through my mind
Burning and yearning, crying and screeching
They never seem to fade away or subside
Telling what to do and where to go
Telling me lies of which I already know
Their rotted charm and graveyard breath
They reek and stink of only death
Scratching and pulling, threatening and wooing
They bring about a torture, but soothing
I think I might be out of my mind
This world and these terrors have not been kind
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2008-07-18 00:08:04]
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Re: Tainted Charm
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 07:30:03 AM AEST
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I like it, it had something dark and brooding about it.
Nice work
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Re: Tainted Charm
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by Cayleigh-Chan on
Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 01:39:49 AM AEST
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This poem really seemed to flow. It was great. I also loved your choice of words. Keep up the good work.
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