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Sanity's mask is sliping

Contributed by Tashy on Thursday, 17th July 2008 @ 09:06:33 PM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry

The wholeness once felt has become incomplete
What must i do for you to feel my heart beat
This mask of happiness behind I must hide
Just to shadow my true feelings which lie inside

I cannot think
I can only sink
Deeper in my despair
Is anyone there?
Can no one hear my pleas for joy?
What if my life is now and anti-ploy?

Trudging through each long numb day
I watch my life slowly fade away
Each day, when night time must fall
I sit alone in my room continuing to ball
I think about all the tearing apart and lies
I begin to wonder if anyone would care if this girl dies

I cannot think
I can only sink
Deeper in my despair
Is anyone there?
Can no one hear my pleas for joy?
What if my life is now and anti-ploy?

My decision is final, no one would miss me
A cold bath is run and i think this is the key
Lowering my body into the cold
My arms weaken and fold
Full deep breaths of air enter my lungs
Releasing the last breath, finally happiness has sprung

I cannot think
I can only sink
Deeper in my despair
Is anyone there?
Can no one hear my pleas for joy?
What if my life is now and anti-ploy?

A persons face flashes through my mind
It is handsome, gentle and kind
My chest starts to rise and fall again
As i wake from the nightmare of watery pain
M body fills with a great relief
To know that the one i love has stopped my grief
A new life in this shell shall begin
With the one i love without a sin.

Copyright © Tashy ... [ 2008-07-17 21:06:33]
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Re: Sanity's mask is sliping (User Rating: 1 )
by juliestevens18 on Wednesday, 6th August 2008 @ 04:46:29 PM AEST
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wow this is a great poem I can really relate to the part where no one would miss me... i really like how you worded the poem, i can tell you were going through a lot. Anyways, i really hope y ou keep writing, I am really glad I read this poem

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