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~Dark Road~
Contributed by
shelby
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Thursday, 17th July 2008 @ 03:06:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
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That dark road, surfacing in memory,
once a little two lined place we ran along by light of silver moon beams.
Representing life, meaning and trust.
That dark road, turned into something evil.
Surfaces scarred lost to directions
the devil barking at the heels of feet running
with no place in sight to go.
The gates of hell swung open wide,
at the end of that dark road.
Devil smiling, pulling and tugging
watching you vanish before my eyes.
Heels dug in holding on with two hands
a set of two hands letting go on the other side
the dark road, the devil and the black dog
no angels sitting nearby.
Suddenly that dark road sucked people up
dragging them down into tar shadows
beware signs flashing, cross bones at the cross roads
engulfing all in a under tow of poison..
No more moon beams on that dark road
dark pitch tar skies, suffocating and silent
barren tree's, dead faces, ghosts of all
skeletons rattle, bone yard a calling.
Dark road is now closed, the metal gate swings shut in the wind.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-07-17 15:06:02]
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Re: ~Dark Road~
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by Jazzyfizzle on
Thursday, 17th July 2008 @ 03:27:14 PM AEST
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i love the imagery..you can really envision the scenes which help you experiance the emotion so much more..
great write. |
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Re: ~Dark Road~
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 17th July 2008 @ 09:27:22 PM AEST
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this is so powerful and i loved the way you protrayed lifes lessons and hardships that was brilliant.. enchanting write this is..
rock on,
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Re: ~Dark Road~
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by recklessguy on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 02:55:41 AM AEST
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Poisoned road and devil nipping on the heels on the dark road.Darlin you could about spook a guy with this one. I know it all to well.
luv u
hug n kiss
reck man |
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Re: ~Dark Road~
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by Crow on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 03:37:54 AM AEST
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| geez Shel...makes me want to pray..lol this is some dark write. Crow |
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Re: ~Dark Road~
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by NoSaint on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 07:34:50 AM AEST
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whoa girl this is some ominous dark stuff here...looking for rosary and holy water right now..
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Re: ~Dark Road~
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by ingeniusidiot on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 09:10:32 PM AEST
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We all these kind of places inside of us..but you put it into words brilliantly...Very dark indeed but very well written.
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