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I'm Not On Myspace !!

Contributed by puppy_dog_eyes on Thursday, 17th July 2008 @ 01:29:52 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Like a horse led to water I'm pulled to your page
But the welcome is poisoning, not to my taste
The script self indulgence, its impact is flat
I have no compulsion to wallow in that

This virtual community spreads like a plague
Yet more invitations those spores from your stage
The aim is to lure but they only repel
I will not submit to this stereotyped hell

They seek to reach out but the target is missed
Monotomy mirrored by those on the list
I had this for breakfast, online diaries speak
I might have new shoes by the end of the week

Friends they collect to display to the world
Intimate personal details unfurled
Gone is the mystery, to strangers laid bare
Facts strewn to visuals everywhere

The concept I've missed of this networking vibe
Exempting myself from this huge cyber tribe
But the look of my latest blog won't cause me strife
As I'm not on myspace, its my private life




Copyright © puppy_dog_eyes ... [ 2008-07-17 01:29:52]
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Re: I'm Not On Myspace !! (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 17th July 2008 @ 03:06:37 AM AEST
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What an excellent piece, Steve... You tell 'em like it is..... really a waste of time as far as I am concerned...I'm not there either...
Jenni


Re: I'm Not On Myspace !! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 17th July 2008 @ 03:09:32 AM AEST
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Ha! I'm sure many could relate; although it shames me to say that I am on myspace. I feel I need to defend that I only have family members and close friends on there and it is a wonderful way to stay in touch, although I do miss the old days where I used to get letters. Good job!


Re: I'm Not On Myspace !! (User Rating: 1 )
by eternalsunshine on Thursday, 17th July 2008 @ 09:45:36 AM AEST
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excellent, great words...

love, peace...;)


Re: I'm Not On Myspace !! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 11:04:20 AM AEST
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Wow Steve! This was so well done!!! I would be raised and applauding, but
I (like Jesseca) own a myspace page. lol You've done so well at showing the
negative side, (and it's THERE, for CERTAIN!), but there are some good things
about it too. Looks like you've just had the bad experiences. :( It's
not for everyone. LOVED the piece. Great work!! =)

~Breezy


Re: I'm Not On Myspace !! (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Monday, 21st July 2008 @ 01:46:35 PM AEST
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well I`m on my space too! I was bored the first day, I do drift there once in a great while, its remebers my password,,I can`t lol!


Re: I'm Not On Myspace !! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 5th August 2008 @ 07:03:22 AM AEST
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Well done and nicely put.
I have a myspace, but am rarely there.


Re: I'm Not On Myspace !! (User Rating: 1 )
by iloveedwardcullen on Sunday, 14th December 2008 @ 03:48:37 PM AEST
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Fantastic.
very very good.
;]


Re: I'm Not On Myspace !! (User Rating: 1 )
by Obscured_Existance on Saturday, 1st August 2009 @ 04:12:33 AM AEST
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Great words!... Ummm just a quick question tho... "You on MySpace? " =oP lol


Par.xxxx


Re: I'm Not On Myspace !! (User Rating: 1 )
by muskiewoman on Saturday, 28th November 2009 @ 09:00:24 AM AEST
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If you look diligently at all things in existence for a
moment you just might find something worthy.
For what is 100% agreeable at all times.

Rouse my mind.
Collette


Re: I'm Not On Myspace !! (User Rating: 1 )
by quadira on Tuesday, 2nd November 2010 @ 07:30:11 AM AEST
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My views exactly.


Re: I'm Not On Myspace !! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 24th November 2014 @ 03:08:09 PM AEST
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Great points and I agree somewhat but I tracked down old friends and long lost cousins on social networking (Facebook).

Great poem though. Me likes.

You're on Facebook though...or someone stole your picture and name. :) So are a few of the commentators.

Take care and thank you.




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