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Dark Water
Contributed by
KismetsPoet
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Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 05:37:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I fall into the endless dark
My 'so long's said too soon
I scream out bubbles in the black
Just barely see the moon
Don't try to kick, don't try to fight
Sink deeper in my pain
My eyes are burning, vision's cloudy
Never feel the rain
I see your face within my mind
Its beauty makes my cry
You left for me, for my own good
Oh please, could you not lie?
I'll hurt no more, I'll feel no more
I'll fall into a haze
There's no breath left within my chest
Sink in my watery grave
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KismetsPoet
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2008-07-16 17:37:14]
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Re: Dark Water
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by -Nik-91- on
Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 11:20:01 PM AEST
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well i just have to say thats the best poem i hav read this year
its so deep and real
keep writting
look forward of seeing more of it
Nikki xxxxxx |
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Re: Dark Water
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by wheels on
Saturday, 26th July 2008 @ 09:34:42 AM AEST
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Again - such a sincere and somber pain. A loneliness of the heart - a casting to the shadows left within our pain. very nice!
--kevin
the lonely vagabond |
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