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My Pledge
Contributed by
ThaMikeMan
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Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
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ThankYouPoems
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I know Im here because god doesnt make mistakes
Creating new life and dreams are risk he always takes
I thank him for parents keepin me in line
i thank him for brothers and sisters, there doing fine
i thank him for the gift to rhyme
i thank him that i will see heavin in time
i thank him for food to keep me going
i thank him for water, keeps my juices flowing
i thank him for music keepin me in joy
ja rule, dmx, an the love they deploy
most of all i thank him for my heart
cause it always been there from the start
and untill the end
Thanks god, my true loving friend
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ThaMikeMan
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2003-03-17 09:00:00]
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Re: My Pledge
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 11:42:21 AM AEST
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Can I ask how old you are. The poem seems quite immature but I am sure there are reasons for that. Maybe you are quite young or you intended it that way?
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Re: My Pledge
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 07:16:31 PM AEST
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| awww, i think this is lovely, very sweet write, and the ending was a happy surprize too:) huggs nessa |
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