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Swollen Toe's
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 03:26:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Do you see the fog a even sullen blue
eagle cry high so high wings unaltered truth
flakes of glass midmorning dew gleams in meadows green
sense of seamless reality held and dragged in dreams
Volcanoes brew and forged the land growth a ending in line
a rising in our friction clock is slow in the wind
walls have risen minds clean in the wash
sullen we walk as leaders mucking in sloth
Ceramic in nature we crack in the heat
swollen toes we stub everyone we meet
grown in gardens with crab as our grass
truth is not taught answers are just sass
questions none of them good
looking for things that should be left misunderstood
concrete in the way glass to smeared to see
songs song time to just be free
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lostrelic
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2008-07-16 15:26:14]
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Re: Swollen Toe's
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by sorrowsofabrokenheart on
Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 03:47:22 PM AEST
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| beautifuly worded and original love it. |
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Re: Swollen Toe's
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 17th July 2008 @ 01:40:47 AM AEST
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There is a lot of imagery in this.
All cleverly stitched together to form the whole.
Nice work
Steve |
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Re: Swollen Toe's
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by wheels on
Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 09:26:41 AM AEST
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Very good imagery. A weave of thoughts.
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