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Teardrops..
Contributed by
jnep
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Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 10:06:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Clouds dance with flickers
of light, As Heaven's tears fall
Longing for the Sun..
Copyright ©
jnep
... [
2008-07-15 22:06:00]
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Re: Teardrops..
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by Sylvias on
Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 10:39:23 PM AEST
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| Gorgeous. I especially love the last line. |
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Re: Teardrops..
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 11:20:49 PM AEST
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Sweet haiku.... loved the imagery I got here....
Jenni |
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Re: Teardrops..
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 09:48:25 AM AEST
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14 words paint a wonderful picture.
Great write........Mike |
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Re: Teardrops..
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by sorrowsofabrokenheart on
Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 04:16:06 PM AEST
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| never knew you could take so few words and arrange them in such a way that takes the reader so deep into thought. |
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