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~Rusty Doors~
Contributed by
shelby
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Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 04:57:22 AM in AEST
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Halls of dark long and unforgiving
at the end of each a rusty door.
No key no knob just old and nasty
behind it another solid brick wall.
No fresh wood or polish
no key, no light no more
no turning point or other side
just black halls and those ugly rusty doors.
Creaking floors, creaking hearts
be careful where you step.
Valleys no peaks at the ending
just old and ugly rusty doors.
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shelby
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2008-07-15 04:57:22]
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Re: ~Rusty Doors~
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by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 05:31:26 AM AEST
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Kinda reminds me of how my mind used to seem to me...so many doors that i hadnt opened in such a long time that they were old a rusted...alot of them so much so that they were rusted shut...I liked your imagery with this piece..I liked it...
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Re: ~Rusty Doors~
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by wheels on
Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 07:41:59 AM AEST
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I love you michelle - you are such a dear.
damn those FN doors. I love this poem beyond words. You are a true friend - I wish you only the best.. May light replace the rust and the doors be those of opppurtunity.
The poem is superb in its imagry and it thougt
--Kevin
the forever loney vagabond
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Re: ~Rusty Doors~
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by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 07:42:34 AM AEST
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haunting write
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Re: ~Rusty Doors~
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 08:03:35 AM AEST
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Good imagery....
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Re: ~Rusty Doors~
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by freckle on
Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 08:53:06 AM AEST
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I enjoyed your poem. It made me feel sad and hopeless....like all hope was gone, forever.
If this is truly the state of your heart I wish you peace and happiness.
A very emotionally stirring piece.
Thanks for sharing it!
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Re: ~Rusty Doors~
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 09:11:53 AM AEST
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| this is very depressing but well written. |
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Re: ~Rusty Doors~
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 11:46:15 AM AEST
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this is very well written.. I enjoyed it.. it could refer to alot of things or aspects of life.. lovely job
rock on,
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Re: ~Rusty Doors~
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by recklessguy on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 03:00:16 AM AEST
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Guess I gonna need to wind up the kit cat and run down some rusty doors darlin.
You are to damn pretty to be blue darlin.
10-4
kiss and a rose of red
Me |
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