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Summer Fruit
Contributed by
freckle
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Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 11:01:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Summer Fruit
Berries on the bush
Ripe, juicy, savory too
I will pick at dawn...
Berries gone - birds chirp, content!
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freckle
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2008-07-14 11:01:31] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Summer Fruit
(User Rating: 1 ) by zenith66 on
Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 04:40:18 PM AEST (User
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wow, that was nothing short of succulent, i could taste the berries in the morning, feel the savoury sticky paste on my lips, and you've done it such a small piece, just fantastic, i too felt content after reading this, who could not in natures bosom, where all else is forgot, you have written a beauty here, keep it up!!! |
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