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Chase the Sun
Contributed by
wizard
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Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 07:48:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Chase the sun
Face the rain
Barter none
Hide your pain
Sow your seeds
Dreams will grow
State your needs
Always know
Don’t retreat
Never run
Take a seat
Come undone
Rape the night
Drain the moon
Drape delight
Take it soon
Copyright ©
wizard
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2008-07-14 07:48:12]
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Re: Chase the Sun
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by Nothingness on
Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 08:58:49 AM AEST
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| Wow, really nice. I like it a lot especially the first stanza, awesome write |
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Re: Chase the Sun
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 09:32:26 AM AEST
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Good choice of words...well done..
Jenni |
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Re: Chase the Sun
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by eeeitak on
Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 12:05:53 PM AEST
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| THIS IS INCREDIBLE |
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Re: Chase the Sun
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by Thespia on
Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 06:22:49 PM AEST
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So Simple
So lovely
So strong
Thankyou |
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Re: Chase the Sun
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 12:33:37 AM AEST
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Good stuff Wizard
I like it |
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Re: Chase the Sun
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2008 @ 02:07:55 AM AEST
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| Every line in this is powerful. The third stanza is what hits me hardest personally. It makes me want to be brave and throw away inhibitions at the same time. Wonderful writing. |
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