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A slave in the soul
Contributed by
Phantomvampyress
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Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 06:14:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My soul has dried up from feelings
my mind numb to thinking of what the future holds
I only see a firey Hell
Chaining me to a wall with no voice to call out
breathing all the toxins of bitterness in
I realize .. I'm Lost without you here
*Vampyress Jenni*
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Phantomvampyress
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2008-07-14 06:14:34]
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Re: A slave in the soul
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by wizard on
Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 06:16:27 AM AEST
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nice job... glad you're writing again, hopefully this will "kick start" your pen and you'll be posting more,
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Re: A slave in the soul
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 08:00:42 AM AEST
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So much said in so few words... This is a remarkable write....I hope to see more from you soon..
Hugs
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Re: A slave in the soul
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 12:56:00 AM AEST
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| Like the flow of this |
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Re: A slave in the soul
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 03:42:07 AM AEST
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Haunting write Jen, it is hard to feel this way hope you will be ok.
I think you potrayed a brilliant write in few words it smacks one right in the heart sweety.
Hugs
ps was nice to hear from you
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Re: A slave in the soul
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 03:43:50 PM AEST
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A sad but beautiful write, ne're the less Jenn,
nice to read your little masterpeices once
again, take care my friend . . .
Ben |
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