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The Great Spirit
Contributed by
wheels
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Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 03:43:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The desert curled its warm tongue
And called my name
A whisper deep into the night
Opening out upon the blistering sands
Her heart lay sticky and bleeding.
The Indian stayed his steed
His throat was dry and raspy
Casting medicine to the wind
Answering in wolf-call whispers
…longing
So I went his calling wandering way
With feathers in my hair.
We rode that day,
Into the night
The Indian and I.
He did not smile
Weathered away in sandstone faces
His, Bronzed and matted
With appraising eyes
Seeking the broken trail
Tracking the Great Spirit’s shadow
Fluttering in the Devils dust.
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wheels
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2008-07-14 03:43:06]
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Re: The Great Spirit
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by shelby on
Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 05:41:08 AM AEST
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Ohhhh Kevin this is awesome. I went with you on this journey. Incredible write.
Michelle
work has me messed up so I will be around soon
big mess lol |
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Re: The Great Spirit
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 10:50:22 AM AEST
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Very intriquing...I enjoyed this...
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Re: The Great Spirit
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by wizard on
Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 02:30:37 PM AEST
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A great tale ... sounds like a nice journey, glad i went on it ..
nicely done,
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Re: The Great Spirit
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by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 07:44:33 AM AEST
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mesmerizing write
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