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Just Walk Away
Contributed by
storm_amoure
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Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 12:49:32 AM in AEST
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Every time I say it's the last
It's time to move on and forget the past
But when I'm strong and able to say no
You show up and I can't tell you to go
So we get together and do our thing
And I refuse to think it's just a fling
But when things begin to get really hot
You go off with some girl, and my heart is shot
Once again I'm left depressed and sad
But most of all, at myself, I am mad
Mad at myself for falling for you
And thinking, again, I won't end up blue
I then curse you until i cry no more
I curse and curse until my heart's not sore
Once again I am strong and i don't care
But you come back and again I am there.
I know if it doesn't kill me, it makes me stronger
But every time you leave, my pain lasts longer
So this time if you're not here to stay,
Spare me the pain and please just walk away.
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Re: Just Walk Away
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by Nothingness on
Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 09:20:19 AM AEST
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| Very emotional and well written, I could feel your pain and frustration. I too have been there and god knows its so hard to let go, but you are doing the right thing venting it out and handeling it really well. *hugs* everyone is here to support you. Keep writting! Again beautiful write. |
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Re: Just Walk Away
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 01:25:18 AM AEST
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If only we could do what we know we should do,
love
is irrational
and
unpredictable....
well done. |
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Re: Just Walk Away
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 02:45:31 AM AEST
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this is a great expression of pain.. you have put it into words well..
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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