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The Echo of Silent Weeping
Contributed by
MissTeenSuicide
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Saturday, 12th July 2008 @ 06:36:46 PM in AEST
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I wish I had someone who's there for me
Who would see my pain and care for me
Hiding behind this smile can't last forever
Blue eyes grow bloodshot, each second longer
This square room, so dark yet crowded still
Though I am alone, my crowd is my pills
If I were ill, they could cure what ails me
Alas it's not that simple, all solutions have failed me
I can't stay here for my longer, I fear
And try as I might, I can't get away from here
So my best chance would be to try to return to sleeping
And listen to the echo of the silent weeping
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2008-07-12 18:36:46]
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Re: The Echo of Silent Weeping
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by Thorin on
Sunday, 13th July 2008 @ 04:21:40 PM AEST
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Wonderfully Constructed, almost too real. You have shared your grief with me through text alone.
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Re: The Echo of Silent Weeping
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by wheels on
Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 09:31:29 AM AEST
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A touching woeful write. The final stanza closes so sad and somber...
--Kevin
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