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Fallen
Contributed by
ravenblack_phoenix
on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I've fallen from grace,
Tattered and torn,
Such a disgrace,
My wings are no more...
You said you would catch me,
You gave me your word,
I gave you my heart,
Then I gave up my world.
And I can't understand it,
I can't comprehend..
Why was I so blind?
Why won't my heart mend?
Do you see...?
This love that you've wounded,
It's too much to take.
I've slipped through your fingers,
You've let my heart break.
I've fallen from grace,
Tattered and torn,
It's such a disgrace,
My wings are no more...
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ravenblack_phoenix
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2003-03-17 06:00:00]
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Re: Fallen
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 06:07:19 AM AEST
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So sad..but so beautifully written.. Hope you fly high again...soon...
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Re: Fallen
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by venkat on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 06:17:04 AM AEST
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| wow! it is really heart rending. venkat |
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Re: Fallen
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 06:23:37 AM AEST
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| excellent! i love this poem! |
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Re: Fallen
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 07:39:02 AM AEST
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What a brilliant poem. So moving..... Good work!!
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Re: Fallen
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 07:40:23 AM AEST
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Wow! Great write!
"You said you would catch me,
You gave me your word,
I gave you my heart,
Then I gave up my world. "
Excellent! Blessed be,
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: Fallen
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by undead_poet14 on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 10:46:13 AM AEST
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absolutely wonderful poem! i really liked it... This touched me deeply... you're a great writer... ^^
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Re: Fallen
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by Varro on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 01:02:07 PM AEST
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| Nice imagery and deep emotion. I was moved by it. This is how poetry should affect the senses! Good job. |
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Re: Fallen
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by shelby on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 02:32:38 PM AEST
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Very well written. Emotional write. I enjoyed it!!
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Re: Fallen
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by youngpoet1989 on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 08:13:14 PM AEST
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EXCELLENT!
your words are beautiful. |
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