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Life’s Sighs
Contributed by
wheels
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Saturday, 12th July 2008 @ 03:51:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Wandering calls my soul
As tears drift…
Fairies wavering wonderfully
‘fore my eyes
Closed in peaceful solace.
Passion wallows moment to moment
Curling
Like tides ebbing
With the tremble
Lifting ‘neath the breast
Of lovely life sighs.
Secret treasures hide
Not so secret
Clouded
Warily wandering with the turmoil of our thoughts
Searching for what lays shallow
In the hollow of your shoulder
Lifting lovely in life’s sighs.
Copyright ©
wheels
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2008-07-12 15:51:01]
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Re: Life’s Sighs
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by beautiful_letdowns on
Saturday, 12th July 2008 @ 04:15:08 PM AEST
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| wow you really got the way you were feeling out there and sucked the reader in.. nice write, thanks for posting |
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Re: Life’s Sighs
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by shelby on
Sunday, 13th July 2008 @ 02:20:52 AM AEST
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Kevin my friend this is beautiful it made me sigh can you hear it?
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Life’s Sighs
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th July 2008 @ 10:24:11 AM AEST
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Beautifully worded write Kevin,
Makes one feel as though floating
Great write...........Mike
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