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The Shallow Grave
Contributed by
wheels
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Saturday, 12th July 2008 @ 03:44:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Chances come like soft spoken footsteps
Through the park
Then slip away
Like springtime streams
Into the sticky summer.
Such routine should not have been
Day-to-day
With footsteps dragging
Alone, entrenched,
Trapped for winter’s wait.
Though…
Such is the way of things unseen
While waiting for tomorrow
As dust shall come invade the spirit
And settle upon the rust
Of forgotten dreams.
Copyright ©
wheels
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2008-07-12 15:44:32]
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Re: The Shallow Grave
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by shelby on
Sunday, 13th July 2008 @ 02:23:41 AM AEST
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OMG you brought a few tears to my eyes with this one.
And settle upon the rust of forgotten dreams.......
Geez my friend. Hugs hugs hugs hugs
HUGS
Michelle |
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Re: The Shallow Grave
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by emystar on
Sunday, 13th July 2008 @ 04:20:45 PM AEST
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Sad but well written, my friend.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Shallow Grave
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 12:02:58 AM AEST
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Kevin, this is so painfully beautiful. There is such a melancholy and forlorn
air to these words, and yet they are so beautiful in their imagery. You do this
sort of thing so well. You have an uncanny skill to capture a heart with beauty
only to break it with the deepest, most profound sadness imaginable.
Damn fine writing. Kudos, my friend.
~Breezy
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