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Entropy
Contributed by
ravenblack_phoenix
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Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 05:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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She cries tears of blackness,
Her soul thinning,
A symbol of her emptiness,
Light, the darkness is winning.
Draining away her holiness,
Her mind and it's thoughts of sinning,
Her body contracting some dark disease,
As she looks skyward, weeping...
Crying blackened tears;
The acidic blood of the damned...
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2003-03-17 05:00:00]
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Re: Entropy
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 05:08:38 AM AEST
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| ooooh yes, lovely dark write, well done:) |
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Re: Entropy
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by venkat on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 06:13:49 AM AEST
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| great sad picture..just add suitable back ground also to your picture to deepen the effect. venkat |
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Re: Entropy
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by wyrd_faerie on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 12:28:20 PM AEST
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| wow...i love the poem and the picture sounds just like things i have drawn...love it... |
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