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In the Morning
Contributed by
ki
on
Friday, 11th July 2008 @ 10:46:43 PM in AEST
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Who are you in the morning
When I open up my eyes?
Put the slippers on beside the bed
And shuffle thru your lies
Do you see me and my emptiness,
The confusion on my face
The sarcasm will amuse my mind
And let laughter take it's place
Who are you in the morning
When the sun still shadows me?
As I'm getting dressed to start the day
In utter disbelief
I will never understand you
Or anything you say
Im talking,your not listening
But would it matter anyway?
Copyright ©
ki
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2008-07-11 22:46:43]
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Re: In the Morning
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th July 2008 @ 10:29:00 AM AEST
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Such a sad write. Unfortunately, this
happens far too often.
Great write.........Mike |
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Re: In the Morning
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 12:07:57 PM AEST
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" Im talking,your not listening
But would it matter anyway? "
The above line is truly a most
provocitive statement, lovely
flow and presentation, without
impedeing on the seriousness
of the leggitimacy of what's
being conveyd . . .
ty 4 your comment and read
as well, deeply appreciated . . .
Ben . . .
myheartsvoice
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Re: In the Morning
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 30th July 2015 @ 03:05:41 PM AEST
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sad and heartfelt.....
hugs n' love nessa |
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