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Throughout
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Friday, 11th July 2008 @ 12:14:00 PM in AEST
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Throughout the still night
We danced on feathery clouds
Two hearts gently beating
Together with one sound
Throughout the still night
Across the milky way
We held hands and danced
Until the break of day
Throughout the still night
As stars passed us by
We laughed and sang
No time to stop and cry
With dawns light
I somehow still knew
I had spent the night
Joyously beside you
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NoSaint
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2008-07-11 12:14:00]
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Re: Throughout
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by shelby on
Friday, 11th July 2008 @ 12:24:18 PM AEST
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Ohhhhh wow wow the pen is singing among other things *winks* this is lovely my friend lovely.
Beautiful flow it fit the flow of love and open midnight sky.
huggies
Michelle |
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Re: Throughout
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th July 2008 @ 05:43:52 AM AEST
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I see Michelles side of it, but before I read her impression I felt a great sadness, as if it was all a dream, yes a very happy dream, but that dawn found you alone.
Must just be my broken side, but I will say its nice the way you leave it up to the reader! |
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Re: Throughout
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th July 2008 @ 10:38:36 AM AEST
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Shari,
Now my view.
I just love the way you write. I have misses
your words as they just seem to flow down to
the last word.
Happy to see you again..........Mike |
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Re: Throughout
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 10:44:24 AM AEST
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Oooh Grrlftriend....quite a romantic night I'd say.... Lovely....
Jenni |
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